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After a little break, which I filled out a bit more concrete literature, I came back to this saga, to see what happens next. I prepared myself mentally for it, or so I thought.
After reading the chapter number one, I realized it would be a difficult passage, because already in the first twenty pages appeared everything that annoyed me in the previous part, namely, after five days of torment returned from sleep inner goddess, lots of expressive shouting of the main character and Christian still over and over with this food... Additionally... five days? After such a spectacular break-up? ... and no more thoughts about their relationship, a box of flowers, helicopter flight and they indulge in desire again, again he is imperious, jealous, and she, of course, undergoes to him... I expected that, although give him in the snout, or at least her legs not softened right away, and nothing of these things... I guess she liked subconsciously spanked in the previous part :D And all this took place only 20 pages! Well... apparently life flows rapidly, you cann’t waste time, and I said A, so I had to say B and I waded into this further.
And then... the same thing over and over (he lifts her head, the goddess is doing weird things, overturning eyes, he is handsome and smells good, she is so pure and innocent, etc.), arguing about some bullshit, they have classic sex, sex with ice cream, and then she on top, and again... he puts her balls, all the time thinking about fucking, spanking and then he takes her from behind, then again classic, and again she on top, then at the bottom... do various other little interesting things.... No, boredom at its worst! Lots of hopeless dialogues about nothing, some seeds of side quests, even criminal, that disappear quickly as a fart in the wind...
I finish with this. Now I'm 100% sure that I don’t read the next part. Don’t even want to know how it will end, or they will live happily ever after, or long and unhappy or maybe he will die, or maybe both of them die, or his finger or other object stuck in her ass... I don’t care.
But I’m still of the opinion that the whole story had potential and could be something really brilliant, if not this awful language that effectively rejected me.
1/10
